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Post by meg on Jan 4, 2010 10:29:59 GMT -5
NAME:Audrey Lee Sayson AKA:Audo AGE:18 HEIGHT:5'4 WEIGHT:112 lbs EYE COLOR:Brown HAIR COLOR:It depends on her mood. ETHNICITY:Caucasion LIKES: *Boys *Booze *Marlboro menthols *Raving *Hello Kitty *Playing the guitar. DISLIKES: *People who judge her by her hair or the way she dresses *Her parents making all of her decisions. *Snobby girls. SECRETS:Audrey has bulemia. But it doesn't embarrass her since most of the girls she knows have it as well. GRADE AND/OR OCCUPATION:About to be a college freshman. She just recently quit her job at her local record store for sexual harassment. SEXUAL ORIENTATION:Bi-curious PLAY BY PLAY:Audrey Kitching
PERSONALITY:
Loving Side: Audrey is a very loving girl and isn't afraid to show it. She cares about her family and friends dearly. And would do just about anything for them. She's broken a few arms and gave a couple bruises for her close friends. Since Audrey is the only child she treats her friends as if they were her family. And her friends are probably alot better to be around than her family.
Bitchy Side: Audrey is very outspoken and could care less what people think about it. She hates when people make fun of her style and she's not afraid to show them exactly what she thinks about it. Though she can be nice, if she doesn't like you she will act like a bitch. And there's nothing anyone can do or say to change it. She's stubborn and when she sets her mind on something, what's done is done. She doesn't get along with people with the same attitude as her. And when she does meet people like that, then let's just say it doesn't end pretty.
Fun Side: You can tell what kind of girl Audrey is just by looking at her. The girl loves to have fun and have as much of it as she can. She's eccentric and random. And sometimes the spontaneity can get her in trouble. But she won't care. As long as it was worth it. Audrey can't stand silence or not doing anything. So she'll suggest doing just about anything to get out of the house. Some might say that her fun side is down right irresponsible.
Naive Side: Audrey likes to think that she knows the world but really she knows nothing. She allows her friends to persuade her to do things though she knows that they might not be good for her. She doesn't know much about the real world. And didn't really have to work for her money. The only reason she worked was to get out of the house. She's had almost everything given to her and doesn't know a thing about hard work.
PLACE OF BIRTH:Hollywood, California DATE OF BIRTH:January 1st, 1991 FINANCIAL STATUS:Her parents are loaded, but she's broke. FATHER:Andrew Sayson:Businessman/Ceo. MOTHER:Leah Sayson:Plastic surgery addicted socialite. SIBLINGS: None.
HISTORY:
Hometown: Audrey thinks Hollywood/Los Angeles is one of the most beautiful cities in the world. She thinks anyone can be hypnotized by the bright lights and the glamour. It's the birth place of pop culture and has an amazing rock scene. Music is her love. She spends alot of her time listening to music. Going out to shows. Raving or partying. She also listened to alot of it when she worked at the local record store. Family life: She's the only child and her parents could care less about her. She doesn't understand why they decided to take a vacation anyways. It also surprised her that they actually decided to drag her along with them. Her dad is a ceo of a huge conglomerate and spends most of his time away. Her mother is addicted to plastic surgery and vacations 9 monthes out of the year. Andrea was mainly raised by her nanny Francine. Francine was more of a mother to her than her real mom. And she loves her for it.
Childhood: Though she doesn't look like it, she was a pageant girl. And she hated every minute of it. Traveling all the time to participate in pageants gets in the way of being a kid. The sad thing about it was, although her mother made her do them she didn't even attend all of them. Just another part of her life her parents controlled.
Addictions: Everything changed once she got into high school. Once her parents thought she didn't need a nanny anymore, she had the freedom to do whatever she pleased. It all started with a game of button button in a friends garage, when she drank a drink laced with lsd. And although it was the first and last time she dealt with lsd, it wasn't the last time she did drugs. She pops a few pills at raves and snorts a few lines of cocaine every now and then.
ROLEPLAY EXAMPLE:
Audrey walked into her 3 story town house around 4 p.m. She lugged her back pack full of books up the stairs and into her bedroom after an exhausting day of classes. She felt like her teachers were gaining up on her. Not only did she have to study for finals but she also had to finish her english end of the year project. Maybe I should've did this when she first assigned this. she thought to herself with a sigh. Boring. Audrey threw her bag on the bed as she headed over to her computer to turn on her itunes playlist. Click click and the speakers began to play the new One Republic song. She ran her fingers through her soft light blonde hair a few times before putting it up in a messy bun. She then walked back to the bed and began unloading her books from her backpack. Finals... What a drag.. she thought as she decided to save her project for later and just start studying for history. She sighed before she laid down on her stomach on the bed. "Here we go," she mumbled to herself as she began studying the chapters for tomorrows final. blockquote]
NAME: Meg EXPERIENCE:6 years. WHERE DID YOU FIND US?Proboards support.
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Post by colton lee wade on Jan 4, 2010 10:57:29 GMT -5
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Hey! You've got a good start here, but can you add more to the personality and the history section? the personality should be at least 2 paragraphs and the history should be 4. Each paragraph should have at least 5 sentences as well. Also, can she have ooone secret? Everyone has them, whether they'd openly admit it is a different thing though. But yeah fix up those things and it should be awesome. Love Audrey already. ^^
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Post by meg on Jan 5, 2010 3:15:06 GMT -5
Ok. Will fix.
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Post by kayla ariella leilani on Jan 7, 2010 6:03:59 GMT -5
we didnt see much of any change to this application, the personality isnt really broken up into paragraphs like specified, what you did was break one paragraph into four small ones, which dont really contain the specified changes
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Post by meg on Jan 7, 2010 10:45:18 GMT -5
Each thing that explain part of her personality and history are paragraphs. And each one have more than 5 sentences.
Loving:6 Bitchy:7 Fun:9 Naive:6
Hometown:8 Family life:8 Childhood:5 Addictions:5
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