VAN DER HAGAN, Marissa Isabella(Done)

[Marissa Isabella Van Der Hagan]

NAME:Marissa Isabella Van Der Hagan
AGE:Nineteen
HEIGHT:5'7
WEIGHT:145
EYE COLOR:green
HAIR COLOR:light brown
ETHNICITY:American Indian, European, Hawaiian
LIKES:Dancing, Grapes, Romiette and Julio, The Twilight Saga, hanging out with friends, Thunderstorms, Horses, Dolphins, Love Stories, Sunsets, and Shopping

DISLIKES:Jealous ex-girlfriends, Cramps, Hash Browns, Total Snobs, Sad stories, Fog, watching animals die, Pink, Thousand Island Dressing, Winter, and Halloween
SECRETS:She feels she is responsible for the death of her ex-boyfriend, Max
GRADE AND/OR OCCUPATION:College Junior/Intern at local hospital
SEXUAL ORIENTATION:Straight
PLAY BY PLAY:Jenna Dewan

PERSONALITY:

Sweet:
The best part of her personality. She's very kind-hearted.When sshe was fourteen, Marissa put together a Christmas for the sick children celebration. They had a Santa there and he gave each of the children gifts. She also believes in sharing. Sharing=caring.

Wild:
Only the people fairly close to her have seen this side of her and it's normally at an exclusive social event. She loves to have a good time even if that includes breaking a few rules at times. Sometimes she gets a little too wild for even herself to handle but her friends always call her on it. She loves them so such!

Angry:
The sudden rage. Only a select amount of people as ever gotten Maris here. She tries to hold it in but once it's out, it's downhill from there.Her step-mom, ex-boyfriend, and dad are the only three who managed to get her there and their constellation prize....well we won't rehatch the past.When she's angry I get *itchy with everyone but Rissy has learned to try and control it because it almost cost her her best friend.

Shy: Whenever Ris around a guy that she likes she completely loses it. She speaks in tongue and it's like she becomes stupid for a moment. It also happens whenever she feels she's being pressured. She's pretty much gotten over the shy phase but it revisits her every so cute boy.
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PLACE OF BIRTH:Cambridge, Ma
DATE OF BIRTH:07/30/1990
FINANCIAL STATUS:Wealthy
FATHER:James Eduardo Van Der Hagan
MOTHER:Marisol Anabelle Van der Hagan
SIBLINGS:Allison Nicole Van Der Hagan, David Zachary Van Der Hagan, Nathaniel Andrew Van Der Hagan


HISTORY:

July 30th:"Happy Birthday, my precious little one",said Marisol Van Der Hagan to her daughter as she held her in her arms for the first time."James,look at her",she said as she gestured for James to come and see his daughter."She's so precious and beautiful",he said as he picked her up."I'm going to be the best dad to you",he said as he kissed her forehead and returned her to the arms of her mother.

May 7th: The four-year-old girl sat in her room on the floor playing with her dolls.Her mom ran in with a panicked and scared look on her face."Rissa,sweetie listen to me, grab your Little Mermaid bag and put some toys and clothes in it and let's go!",she exclaimed as she ran to get her phone.Marissa was scared but she did what she was told.Fifteen minutes later, the two were gone in a taxi."Now, Marissa darling, I'm going to have to send you to live with you Aunt Nancy until things are better, I love you",she said. A woman about thirty years old got into the cab and Marisol got out.She kissed her daughter's forehead and got out of the taxi.

March 2nd - The day of her parents wedding anniversary. It was also the day that Mari was finally going home to be with her mom and dad. It was early morning and she was decorating a card to give to her mom once she got there. The phone rang. The nine year old girl rushed to answer it. It was her nana and she was halfway to tears. She called to tell her that her mom had died in a freeway accident. She dropped the phone and ran into her aunts room to tell her. The two immediately made plans to come to the states for the funeral. Once they were there and the funeral was over, there was a big argument about where Marissa would be living now and when given the choice, she chose to return to Barcelona with her aunt.

May 7th: "We are gathered her today in the sight of God to join these two in Holy Matromony.",said the Priest that stood in front of Marissa. The fourteen year old girl stood there with a bouquet of roses in her hand. Her dress flared down her body. She stood there, angry on the inside. It was her dad's wedding day to Angelena and she was a bridesmaid. She watched the two and smiled fakely sweet. He was getting married the day before her mother's birthday. She knew that her dad was making a mistake but he would not see to reason. After the wedding was over with,she and her aunt returned to Barcelona.


July 30th: "Happy Flipping Sixteenth birthday huh?!?!?" Marissa was enraged. Her aunt had revealed to her the truth about her "cousin", Nathan. She couldn't believe that they had kept this a secret from her for so long. "As if it wasn't bad enough that I was lied to by everyone else, but you too?" She had a look of disbelief on her face as she looked at her aunt. She began to pack up her bag and grabbed her other things. "I'll stay with a friend until I can arrange to go back to America so I can be with my brother before he dies." She shut the door and never came back to that house again.

December 18th: It had been over a year that she had been back in America. She was seventeen and in love. Max and Mari had just come from the movies and Max decided that he wanted to take a walk so they strolled through the park. It was starting to get dark, but they were having so much fun just talking they didn't notice. The park was fairly empty, except for a few vendors. They passed an ice cream vendor and Mari decided that she wanted some so Max went back to grab two vanilla cones and she kept walking at a slow pace, staring up at the changing sky. Someone grabbed her arm and she figured it was Max, but it wasn't. "Come quietly and you may stay alive." Mari did what she was told and he led her behind a large tree and began to search her. The end of a gun was pointed at her as his cold dirty hand ran across her body. Tears formed in her eyes until she heard Max call her name. "Max!"The guy slapped her and made her fall. Max raced over to help Mari and angrily started wrestling with the guy. "Run Mari" And so she did. The guy only let her get so far. He knocked Max down and managed to get a shot at her knee. She collapsed to the ground in tears. Trying to crawl and get away she shouted for help as she heard one last shot and knew that Max was dead. She looked into the darkness and the guy was gone....An half hour later the coroner came to pronounce him dead. She cried the whole way to the hospital as she sat in the ambulance, wishing that it would have been her.


Present Day: Marissa is currently a healthy and happy nineteen year old. She is currently living in Hawaii and is going to the local university. She is on a scholarship and is a pre-med biology major. She has no children and no love interest. She is a hopeless romantic who is searching for loving, but is more focused on her future career.

ROLEPLAY EXAMPLE:

Mari smiled as she felt Chandler come behind her and put his arms around her waist. His beautiful eyes met hers and it was as if they were those two crazy love struck teenagers again from two years ago. Marissa smiled at the thought as her level want for Chandler went up. Her instincts wanted to push her to kiss him, but she would feel horrible if she did that because then she would be making him hurt a girl that he obviously cared a lot about. She smiled at the comment about Zach. "Yeah, I think he forgets that sometimes, but whatever high school relationships don't last forever. Ours will probably over sooner than you think." She smiled when she heard his next remark. "Is someone tired already?" She smiled as the song changed and this was more of a slow-paced song. Just the way she liked it.

She turned to look at Chandler and smiled with devilish eyes. She wrapped her arms around his neck and lifted herself towards his ear and smiled. She whispered to him,"I want you...To give me all you got." She smiled as she turned around. She swirled her hair around and started to move her hips in a circular motion. Her body was starting to get a little sweaty. She spun around and lifted her leg so that it would link onto his. She dipped herself and swayed her upper body left and right. She looked at Chandler's face and smiled. She wondered if he was enjoying her little dance. Mari was getting a little tired herself. She felt her phone vibrating in her pocket. She didn't think that Chandler could feel it though. She ignored the text and the call that followed. She had a good idea of who it was already. Mari looked at Chandler and remembered the first time that she'd ever laid eyes on him.

It was her second day at the school. She had really gotten lost this time. There was a group of boys who were grouped together after the bell rang, she figured they were upperclassmen. She had pushed herself to talk to Chandler. "Hey, I'm sort of new here. I'm Marissa Van der Hagan, but you can call me Mari if you would like." She smiled at him and she showed him her schedule. After some simple flirting, she had convinced him to walk her to her class. He was so adorable to her. When he smiled, it made her knees weak. She shook her head and was back to reality. His smile still had the same impact on her that it had once before. She knew in her heart that she was still in love with her, but she simply couldn't admit it. She didn't know how he would react and they were having so much fun. She didn't want this night to be a repeat of what they had talked about on that AIM conversation. She knew in her heart that she would always love him and even if he went away to the army, those feelings that she had would always be there. She wondered what it was about him that drew him to her. She had never cared about anyone the way she cared about him. Zach was no exception. She did care about him, but not the way she cared about Chandler. It was something completely different with these two. It was a natural attraction that would always be there. She smiled as the song came to an end. She couldn't resist her tempation anymore. Mari wrapped her arms back around his neck and lightly kissed his lips. She closed her eyes and wrapped her arms around him tightly and kissed him even more passionately. She pulled away and looked at him and smiled. "I'm sorry." She walked back through the crowd and over to the bar and ordered another cosmo.

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NAME:Nichole
EXPERIENCE:7+years
WHERE DID YOU FIND US?Proboard support

[colton lee wade]

P E N D I N G

I like what you've done with the history so far, but I feel like it's really choppy. I'm not sure what's happening when, especially at the end. Can you throw in a few years or ages? And maybe give some sort of memory about what's she's done recently, like major and college wise? Also you switch between third and first person, so it gets confusing. Sorry to be picky, but it'd really help out.

[Marissa Isabella Van Der Hagan]

Modified.

Hope thats better